In my opinion your translation is quite good, I would change oly some words and correct one line
Where the most beautiful sunrise wakes up
There live good people, honourable and proud,
Where the shine of our sun is being born
There's my homeland - stout and defiant.
Now let's all pray for it
We have no other land.
In my heart there's only one home
My republic is great in heart
|:In my heart the most beautiful star shines
My republic, Republika Srpska:|
Where our forefathers from the past
have written their names in every famous step,
Where the shine of our sun is being born
There's my homeland - stout and defiant.
Now let's all pray for it
We have no other land.
In my heart there's only one home
My republic is great in heart
|:In my heart the most beautiful star shines
My republic, Republika Srpska:|